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Title: Bees
Rating: T
Genre: Fantasy/Sci-Fi
Warnings: Bi-lingual swearing and spontaneous combustion

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2750337/2/Bees

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Frozen Neighbourhood Pond

It started before I know anything
it moves when I start knowing
it ends when I know something
Is knowledge the end of life?

I was intimidated by artificial lights for the longest time. Now I'm not interested in anything else.





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I sit alone in photobooths pretending someones there
making inside jokes to prove that someone used to care
I stick out my tongue, blow bubblgum, and run my fingers through my hair
but when the pictures start to print all I see is four blank stares
I sit alone in photobooths, make goofy faces at the screen
press the button, wait for flash, and smile in between

there's an abstract pain in my legs

and i can feel my cells shifting uncomfortably around each other

with molecules that are way too close to be polite

and the abstract stinging has turned into a numb humming

running up my thighs and spine into my fingertips

as they get loose and clumsy

and almost drop the gem they are holding to ferociously

each inhale like a lion charging at its prey

as she says

"I remember Nolan dragging me to the elementary school gym

the day after Cobain died

and made me act as look-out while he spray-painted

'Nirvana forever' on the wall."

and the stinging washes up again

hairs trying to raise when they are no hair to be risen

and she sighs and throws down her token to an era

i sigh and throw down my token to an era

and we laugh with each other

because the 90s sound so utopic.

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The forum I usually frequent to get poetry critique is infuriatingly slow with actually getting any feedback, so I thought I'd try here. I have five recent ones that I'll post, and it, er, might look kind of annoying and long, but they're rather short individually.

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On the strip, an exercise in superior reach.

On the computer, and exercise in selective decolorization.

Let's take a walk in the snow
You and me

Dance inside the storm
Twirling like flurries

Hair flying upward
Nose bright and red

Mouth screaming in delight
Fall down; become an angel

Stare at giant gray clouds
Is that where snowflakes are born?

Have you ever felt,

Like there's something greater,

That you had once upon a time?


There's something missing.


Sometimes I feel,

Like I don't belong,

In this lifetime,


Sometimes I feel,

Like I loved before,

With such greatness,

It hurt.


Sometimes I feel,

I've left someone behind,

But who?

Who are you?

Are you the one ive waited for my whole life?


Sometimes I try to close that feeling,

Lock it away,

But I cant.


I feel you looking for me,

But where do I begin to look for you?


Have you ever fell inlove with someone that wasn't there?

Were are you..................

Working title: Unseen Embers

Author: Winter Violet

Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Romance

Notes: Just read and review it. I hardly get reviews for a work I've written. It's a story I had since last year and I've been lazy to get it done. Oh well, promise me you'll review it? I really have to know what my readers think of this work. So, big thanks. It's still not finished but I'll get there somehow.

www.fictionpress.com/s/2742502/1/Unseen_Embers

Title: Bees
Rating: T
Genre: Fantasy/Sci-Fi
Warnings: Bi-lingual swearing and spontaneous combustion

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2750337/1/